solidus
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Post by solidus on Mar 14, 2006 11:50:22 GMT -5
I can't really think of a good name for my fan-fic but it's about my SVU Jack Goren. It's set 3 weeks after Jack joined SVU.
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My day started off coming out of my apartment building. It was 3 o'clock in the morning and the sky was pitch black and it was p***ing it down. I didn't really have a car driving license and my motorbike was down the shop, being fixed, so one of my work colleges, Olivia Benson had agreed to give me a lift to work.
Her car was across the road, and what I did next was rather foolish. I crossed the road as fast as I could so I get to Benson's car and out of the bloody rain. Halfway through I heard the sound of screeching tires and I turned to see two blinding light getting closer. The next thing I know being hit by a car and sent flying backwards.
I lie there for god-knows-how-long staring at the pavement. All I can hear is the crying of a young women and Olivia saying to be "Jack! Jack! Jack!"
"Jack!" I felt a nudge at my side as I opened my eyes to find myself in the precents conference room. I shook my head, it had all been a weird dream. "Cragen is about to give his speech." Olivia whispered to me. "Really? I thought he was just going to stand up there and do a funny dance." I then released how rude I was being and apologized "Sorry, I'm a bit cranky today. I had the baby crying all night."
to be continued...
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Post by trubluSVUfan on Mar 14, 2006 19:25:13 GMT -5
Very good start
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Post by Tiffany Novak on Mar 14, 2006 20:35:12 GMT -5
Yeah that's a great start.
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Post by Charisma Cabot on Mar 15, 2006 12:38:08 GMT -5
That's a really good start. Can't wait to see were you go with it.
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zl
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Post by zl on Mar 12, 2010 22:09:45 GMT -5
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